It's not just the story...
Roxanna Rowan may be a genteel Virginia woman, but she is determined to brave the wilds of the untamed frontier to reach a remote Kentucky fort. Eager to reunite with her father, who serves under Colonel Cassius McLinn, Roxanna is devastated to find that her father has been killed on campaign.
Penniless and out of options, Roxanna is forced to remain at the fort. As she spends more and more time with the fiery Colonel McLinn, the fort is abuzz with intrigue and innuendo. Can Roxanna truly know who the colonel is--and what he's done? The Colonel's Lady by Laura Frantz
At thirty-two, strong-willed Amelia Peabody, a self-proclaimed spinster, decides to use her ample inheritance to indulge her passion, Egyptology. On her way to Egypt, Amelia encounters a young woman named Evelyn Barton-Forbes. The two become fast friends and travel together, encountering mysteries, missing mummies, and Radcliffe Emerson, a dashing and opinionated archaeologist who doesn't need a woman's help--or so he thinks. Crocodile on the Sandbar by Elizabeth Peters
And it's not just the words...
"Do you think I am an automaton? A machine without feelings? And can bear to have my morsel of bread snatched from my lips and my drop of living water dashing from my cup? Do you think, because I am poor, obscure, plain and little, I am soulless and heartless? You think wrong! I have as much soul as you and full as much heart! And if God had gifted me with some beauty and much wealth, I should have made it as hard for you to leave me, as it is for me to leave you. I am not talking to you now through the medium of custom, conventionalities, nor mortal flesh: it is my spirit that addresses your spirit; just as if both had passed through the grave and we stood at God's feet, equal. As we are!" Jane Eyre by Charlotte Bronte.
"There is something about words. In expert hands, manipulated deftly, they take you prisoner. Wind themselves around your limbs like spider silk, and when you are so enthralled you cannot move, they pierce your skin, enter your blood, numb your thoughts. Inside you they work their magic." The Thirteenth Tale by Diane Setterfield.
And it's not just the characters...
"Forgive me for startling you with the impetuosity of my sentiments, my dear Scarlett--I mean, my dear Mrs. Kennedy. It cannot have escaped your notice that for some time past the friendship I have had in my heart for you has ripened into a deeper feeling, a feeling more beautiful, more pure, more sacred. Dare I name it you? Ah! it is love which makes me so bold!" Rhett Butler and Scarlett O'Hara, Gone With the Wind by Margaret Mitchell
"I will find you," he whispered in my ear. "I promise. If I must endure two hundred years of purgatory, two hundred years without you--then that is my punishment, which I have earned for my crimes. For I have lied, and killed, and stolen; betrayed and broken trust.
But there is one thing that shall lie in the balance. When I shall stand before God, I shall have one thing to say, to weigh against the rest." His voice dropped, nearly to a whisper and his arms tightened around me. "Lord, ye gave me a rare woman, and God! I loved her well." Jamie and Claire, Dragonfly in Amber, Diana Gabaldon.
I'm glad I didn't write those stories, because I couldn't have done them justice. And they aren't my stories. BUT they have entertained me and enthralled me and inspired me.
Have you read any stories you wish you'd written?
What is it about that book that captivated you?
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Debra E. Marvin tries not to run too far from real life but the imagination born out of being an only child has a powerful draw. Besides, the voices in her head tend to agree with all the sensible things she says. Debra likes to write, weed and wander and is blessed to have the best family and friends in the world. She has decided she needs to live closer to her grandchildren. She’s thankful each day that God is in control, that He chooses to bless us despite ourselves and that He has a sense of humor. Her work has finaled in the TARA, Great Expectations, Heart of the Rockies, Maggie, the Daphne DuMaurier and was recently placed as the overall winner of the Phoenix Rattler contest. Not too bad considering she’s trying a mashup of gospel and . . . gothic.






25 comments:
I've had that feeling numerous times! I felt that way about both The Help and The Hunger Games, which are very different kind of stories. And I don't always feel that way with whole books, but sometimes I come across a turn of phrase or a sentence that is just so perfectly luminescent that I read it several times so that it can soak in and I marvel at the skill of the author and hope to one day be that good.
Deb, I was just thinking today how some books have a special sort of magic you just can't define. We come up with "the rules" of fiction to try to define it, but always come short. Then you'll hear snooty authors insulting best-selling books like "The Shack" and "Twilight" for not being well-written, and ignoring that special magic they have. I might do a post on that one day.
My list of books I wish I'd written (except that I wouldn't have had the pleasure of reading them)
Soul's Gate by Jim Rubart
A Stray Drop of Blood by Roseanna White
The Passion of Mary-Margaret by Lisa Samson
The Hunger Games
Thanks for getting us started ladies.
I agree about certain phrases, Lisa.
I still recall some of them years later.
I am currently listening to Evelyn Waugh's Brideshead Revisited. Such lovely prose! But overall not an uplifting book.
I will just have to get the Hunger Games on audio and catch up!
thanks!
You already nailed mine down... anything from the Outlander series.
Every time I read (or re-read) a book like that I'm inspired to get back to the computer and write, because I yearn to be able to tell those kinds of stories that stay with you long after you close the cover.
Oh, I'd willingly at the Twilight series to that list. Not for quality of writing, per se, but because I really, really, loved the story. And wouldn't it be lovely to have all that instant success? :)
At times, great fiction can do the opposite. "I'll never write that well!" but I love when it just spurs us on to capture those awe-inspiring moments.
I'm going to really think about this as I read. I'm making a point to listen to classic novels on my commute (though I'm quite addicted to mysteries).
Obviously part of the thrill of writing (...that make up for how it also cuts us up into little pieces of doubt) is when we produce something that creates that same reaction we had to great writing in others.
Oh, Deb, you nailed SOOO many books I wished I'd written, beginning with Laura's The Colonel's Lady (and Love's Reckoning ... sigh), GONE WITH THE WIND, of course, Jocelyn Green's OUTSTANDING Wedded to War and anything written by Diana Gabaldon!!
Oh, and I would add Veil of Pearls by MaryLu Tyndall AND her latest, Forsaken Dreams, which I am reading right now and constantly saying to my husband, "this is amazing how ML did this, simply amazing!!"
Hugs,
Julie
I have two books on my horizon that I am going to treat myself to when I finish my WIP.
One is Wedded to War and the other is Love's Reckoning. I will definitely have Forsaken Dreams before the summer is out.
Thanks Julie! (my GWTW soul-sister)
I'm hoping to redeem that hug in September in Indy.
Hey, I see that A LIGHT IN THE WINDOW is going to be on special pricing the next few days. Hooray!
I'm always in awe of anyone who can complete a basic plot, so even if I don't like the story itself I'm jealous of the ability to compose something in full. While I was reading Marion Zimmer Bradley's "Mists of Avalon" I was so immersed that I was afraid to put it down and go to the bathroom lest I missed something! That's writing skill. But for the most part I'm with the commenter who said she's bowled over by amazing phrases. One of my favorites that still sticks with me is one that depicts the rolling in of fog like a tongue licking the pavement. So vivid!
Great post, Deb!
Redeeming Love! Oh my gosh, be still my heart. If only Francine Rivers would share some of her talent with me. :)
Also love Sounds of Silence, by Linda Castilla.
In fact all the big suspense writers turn my head! Would love to write like Harlan Coben or Andrew Gross, Tess Gerritsen, etc, etc, etc.
Ooooh, the best part is I get to put some stories on my TBR list.
Thanks Amy! So true! One school of thought is that a writer must not write in such a way to draw attention to his/her skill (draw attention to him/herself. But when a phrase makes me say WOW, I am not at all said to have been pulled from the story for such beauty.
I bet I can get Mists of Avalon on audiobook... thanks for the heads up.
Thanks for bringing that lovely smile, Debby!
Now you have me looking for Sounds of Silence to put on my list at the library.
Okay, seriously. You are not quite a slacker in the talent department.
Francine Rivers did something for fiction that few people will ever accomplish, when she wrote Redeeming Love. I agree.
My current favorite for mystery is Charles Todd. I'm a sucker for British settings, and their (Charles Todd is a mother-son team) two protag series are set during and right after WW1.
Love Amid the Ashes by Mesu Andrews
The Shape of Mercy by Susan Meissner
Thanks Suzie!
I've heard a lot about both of those books but haven't read them.
Hey Debra,
That is the cool thing about this column today, is that you do get to add to the good old TBR pile. Always a pleasure. Thanks Debra! (love the cute avatar!)
Well some of my favs have already been mentioned (GWTW and The Help--which I credit for getting me off of my behind and start writing again) I have Reedeming Love and the Hunger Games trilogy in my TBR pile.
Zora Neale Hurston wrote Their Eyes Were Watching God in seven weeks, which would make her worthy of strong writer resentment, but she had to write while she had a place to live, so I won't hold that against her. Rosslyn Elliott's trilogy of the Hanby family is very inspiring to me. I have found my own real-life family to write about and I hope to get to them after I am done writing about my fictitious one!
Piper
I have to check out the Hurston novel, Piper. It's so familiar to me yet why can't I recall why? I don't think I read it.
Inkwell's Dina Sleiman is on of those quick writers too. That's okay (what bugs me is how clean that first draft is!)
I'm glad you stopped in. I've been very happy to see how well Rosslyn Elliott's stories are doing. I planned on reading when the first one came out and here I am. Nope, not yet...
Glad to be here! And I know! How can they produce those clean drafts that quickly? Crazy! :)
You probably heard of Hurston's novel because:
1. It was forced on you in school.
or
2. You saw the awful movie version about 6 or 7 years ago on tv with Halle Berry. The guy was hot, but he was all the good in it. Some books are better left away from the movies, just as some make good adaptations.
If by your question which one raises up the old green eyed monster, I would say Rosslyn Elliott's books, but on the other hand, her series gives me hope. I feel as if I can get there with some practice. :)
I've been jealous of screenwriters lately. I think it would be fun to write for television, especially for something funny and/or campy and out there. I think that whenever I watch an old episode of Batman. What a cool job that must have been. Or more recently Dr. Who or Monk.
I know you'll do well, Piper. I will definitely say that as I improve I see more things I need to improve and it can get overwhelming. These books and authors that inspire us are so important to stir up that desire to keep reaching.
I thing many of these tv shows are done by teams of screenwriters. That would be interesting just to sit in and watch them brainstorm and nail down the dialogue.
I think, since I'm in a Golden Age of Mystery mode, the books I wish I'd written are Margery Allingham's Albert Campion books. Not only does she write beautifully, she creates the most wonderful plots that fit together like fine timepieces.
Oh,to plot like that!
Well, Julie, you certainly have me intrigued. I've seen the Campion shows but haven't read the books.
I'll have to see if I can get them on audio through the library (This is the surest way for me to 'read' something!)
Fantastic post, Deb.
There are too many books to list, but I totally wish I'd written Austenland. And Girl with a Pearl Earring.
okay, so now I have to get Austenland. I did see G W Pearl Earring but I don't know much about the book.
I'm taking my lunch hour to search my library (digitally). I can't tell you the last time I actually looked on the shelves for a book.
I love my library!
Susie. I just found Austenland on Audio CD.
Is the production I hear about a movie or a tv series?
They're making a movie. Stephenie Meyer of Twilight is producing.
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