Writing
is an art form, like music or sculpture or dance, but where music uses sound
and dance uses movement, writing uses words. Good writers place exactly the
right words in exactly the right place for maximum effect. Just as a composer
needs to study music theory—scales, chords, the circle of fifths—so too must a
novelist master the tools of language.
Look
at the last sentence again. If you aren’t a musician, I’ll forgive you for
thinking that the circle of fifths has something to do with the five rings of
the Olympic logo or that a chromatic scale is the external layer on a tropical
fish. I have sympathy for those whose music appreciation doesn’t go much beyond
knowing the call letters of their favorite radio stations. I can sum up the entire
breadth of my knowledge of painting with a single phrase: “I know what I like.”
But
language is different. Language is the most accessible of all the arts because each
of us uses it every day. We mumble a “good morning” to our family, listen to
the weather forecast, read the cereal box, and jot a quick note to get more
milk—all within an hour of waking. For the rest of the day we will text, talk,
email, tweat…well, you get the idea. Functioning in a modern society requires
every person to have a bit of a writer living inside.
Given
that language is so important to our everyday lives, I thought it might be fun
to look at some common figures of speech (sometimes called rhetorical devices)
that appear in literature. Why do writers use them? Sometimes we want to add
emphasis. Sometimes we want to make our ideas more memorable. And sometimes, we
just want to play a little joke on our readers.
Did
you see what I did there? That’s called anaphora—starting a series of phrases or
sentences with the same words, in this case “sometimes we want…” Its
counterpart is epistrophe—ending a series of phrases with the same words.
Usually the last of the series carries an extra punch or a little twist—it’s
more emotional or humorous. The reader’s subconscious mind sees the pattern in
anaphora or epistrophe and begins to pay closer attention, waiting for the
final thrust.
A
couple other favorites of mine are asyndeton and polysyndeton. Asyndeton is
taking a series of three or more—words, phrases, even sentences—and not including
a conjunction. It’s tense, abrupt, agitated. Polysyndeton is its opposite. The
writer puts conjunctions between all the words in the series, thereby slowing
down the pace of the series. If you’ve ever read a sentence that goes on and on
and on, you know what I mean.
No,
there won’t be a test on the terms tomorrow. However, when we are aware of the
ways a writer puts words together, we develop a greater appreciation for the
artistry behind good writing, like a musician listening to a master perform. We
can better understand what the writer felt most important and most wanted us to
learn or feel. We come away with a deeper understanding of the ideas and
concepts the writer has put forth.
Of
course, you are probably familiar with some common figures of speech such as
similes, metaphors, irony, allusion. And if you have a teenager in the house? You’re
no doubt well acquainted with hyperbole. (“I’ll just die if I can’t have Latest Gismo X.”)
Did
you ever consider that God also speaks to us in language? The Bible is the
world’s greatest work of literature, and its author uses figures of speech to
add emphasis and make ideas more memorable.
“The
Lord is my shepherd.” Obviously God doesn’t carry a crook and walk around the
hills with a border collie. He just wanted us to know he cares for us like a
shepherd cares for sheep. But, oh, the power of that figure of speech! It is
perhaps the most famous metaphor in the world.
Here’s
a bit of personification (giving human characteristics to objects or animals) from
Isaiah 55:12. “For ye shall go out with joy, and be led forth with peace: the
mountains and the hills shall break forth before you into singing, and all the
trees of the field shall clap
their hands.” Yes, we know.
Mountains don’t have voices and trees don’t have hands, but the word picture
this paints for us is one of impossible beauty and joy and awe.
Now consider Jesus’ conversation with Nicodemus in John chapter 3. Did you ever notice that each time Jesus answers Nicodemus’ questions, he begins with the same phrase? Here’s the familiar King James Version: “Verily, verily, I say unto thee…” The phrase appears in verses 3, 5, and 11. (Anaphora—for those who have already forgotten the term.) Furthermore, he says the first word twice in each instance. Verily is an old word that means “in truth.” Jesus used the word six times in a mere eight verses. Now that’s emphasis! Is there any doubt what Jesus wanted Nicodemus (and us) to learn?
Now consider Jesus’ conversation with Nicodemus in John chapter 3. Did you ever notice that each time Jesus answers Nicodemus’ questions, he begins with the same phrase? Here’s the familiar King James Version: “Verily, verily, I say unto thee…” The phrase appears in verses 3, 5, and 11. (Anaphora—for those who have already forgotten the term.) Furthermore, he says the first word twice in each instance. Verily is an old word that means “in truth.” Jesus used the word six times in a mere eight verses. Now that’s emphasis! Is there any doubt what Jesus wanted Nicodemus (and us) to learn?
Here’s another rhetorical device, parallelism. “I am Alpha and Omega…” Jesus says this four times in Revelations. Parallelism is a way of reinforcing similar ideas by making them parallel. Jesus is both the beginning (Alpha) and the end (Omega)—equally.
In
the first appearance of this phrase, we have parallelism with polysyndeton
(using the conjunction “and” multiple times in the series): “I am Alpha and Omega, the beginning and the ending, saith the Lord, which is, and
which was, and which is to come, the Almighty.” (Revelations 1:8 KJV). Polysyndeton
gives the feeling of something that goes on and on and on—a pretty good
definition of God, as a matter of fact.
Now
let’s look at the last time Jesus speaks this phrase, in Revelations 22:13. This
verse combines parallelism with asyndeton (no conjunctions in the series): “I
am Alpha and Omega, the beginning and the end, the
first and the last.” Asyndeton creates a sense of urgency—very appropriate
since seven verses later Jesus promises he is coming soon.
Pretty
cool, huh? The entire concept of God is too big for our minds to comprehend. But
figures of speech let God communicate with us in a way that we can glimpse a
piece of that greatness.
Have you ever looked at the Bible the way you would a piece of literature, analyzing the Author's use of language to see what points He wanted to emphasize? What did you discover?
After leaving the corporate world to stay home with her children, C.J. Chase quickly learned she did not possess the housekeeping gene. She decided writing might provide the perfect excuse for letting the dust bunnies accumulate under the furniture. Her procrastination, er, hard work paid off in 2010 when she won the Golden Heart for Best Inspirational Manuscript and sold the novel to Love Inspired Historicals. Her current release, The Reluctant Earl, is now available at retailers such as Walmart and Kmart and in online bookstores. You can visit C.J.'s cyber-home (where the floors are always clean) at www.cjchasebooks.com
Have you ever looked at the Bible the way you would a piece of literature, analyzing the Author's use of language to see what points He wanted to emphasize? What did you discover?
After leaving the corporate world to stay home with her children, C.J. Chase quickly learned she did not possess the housekeeping gene. She decided writing might provide the perfect excuse for letting the dust bunnies accumulate under the furniture. Her procrastination, er, hard work paid off in 2010 when she won the Golden Heart for Best Inspirational Manuscript and sold the novel to Love Inspired Historicals. Her current release, The Reluctant Earl, is now available at retailers such as Walmart and Kmart and in online bookstores. You can visit C.J.'s cyber-home (where the floors are always clean) at www.cjchasebooks.com
I love how the Bible translates from Greek--in light of the Hebrew meanings of those same words.
ReplyDeleteAnd becomes such beautiful, evocative words in English
--probably in any language!
I'm sure the scribes of the old and new testament didn't learn about anaphora in their literature classes, either.
I'm adding one to the list:
Antiphrasis
Ironic use of a single word: “It was a cool 100 degrees in the shade.”
Yes, it's pretty neat, Deb. I looked up the Revelations passages in several translations (since I don't read Greek ) and was surprised to see the asyndeton (chapter 22) was consistent across translations (including a French version and a Dutch version). I had thought that perhaps it was just something the writers of the KJV did. Don't know how it looks languages that don't use the Latin alphabet.
ReplyDeleteI love using alliteration, but that's one of those things that doesn't translate well into other languages.
Oh CJ, I'm saving this one. It's wonderful.
ReplyDeleteI love the image of the mountains and hills breaking into song. It really fils my heart with joy. A very powerful image.
Suzie, that verse has been set to music (at least once). Every time I read the words, my mind starts to hum a tune.
ReplyDeleteYou know, combining several of the arts (in this case, words and music) makes the message even more memorable. I guess I knew that, but I didn't think to mention it in my (already long) post.
Oh, cool terms! I didn't know there were names for some of those, even though I use them all the time. :)
ReplyDeleteDeAnna, I'm the same way. Hey, we're readers first, so we tend to develop a good ear for what sounds good or creates a pleasing cadence. One of my goals has been to be more deliberate in my use of such language devices.
ReplyDeleteWant another obscure term I just learned 2 weeks ago? Zeugma. I'll let you look that one up on your own. But yes, I've used that one in my writing without ever realizing it had a name.
I've used Zeugma too! Even though I didn't know it at the time! You're right though that the ear for these things develops with reading. I guess we don't have to know the terms to know when something sounds right.
ReplyDeleteLisa, my fellow zeugma user! Ha, sounds like something risqué.
ReplyDeleteI think learning about these things makes me a better user of them (even though I'd done them subconsciously before). And I'm better about placing them in my writing so I can maximize their effect.
To stick with our musical premise, I'm feeling very much like the person who learns to play by ear and then tries to take a written test on music theory. AHHHHH!!!!
ReplyDeleteI once went through the entire chapter of Proverbs 31 and looked up each and every Hebrew word. There is so much more depth to those words than we get out of the English version... it made that passage come alive in all new ways, and made it relevant to the modern woman (even the ones without servants who don't make all their own clothes!).
Interesting post, CJ! It's fascinating to do word studies of the Hebrew; as Niki just said, there's so much more meaning that we sometimes receive in modern translations. Nice job of digging in for us!
ReplyDeleteI have a list of FIFTY rhetorical devices. Suffice to say I don't think any of us have used them all...
ReplyDeleteI occasionally read over the chart.
thanks C.J.!
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